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Submitted: November 6, 2005
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Ona ceka

"Sacinjen od osmijeha, stisnutim se ustima stitim od kise.
U meni cvate nebo i bezbroj malih sreca cini me sobom.
Jedna zena je rodena i zivi negdje u ovom gradu.
Zelim ju naci. Znam, proci cu kroz poneki oblak tuge,
bez lutanja i zurno, jer ona ceka mene negdje u ovom gradu.
Jedna je rijeka zastala da saceka more.
Od mojih malih sreca sagradit cu najljepsi osmijeh na njenom licu
i skrenut cu njen pogled na istok gdje plamti nebo."

Ivica Smolec


Sorry for croatian... I don't even dare to translate this in english, but trust me, it's beautiful...


Ok, I tried, but I am NOT a translator. Please keep that in mind, thanks :)

"Conceived from a smile, with my lips sealed i protect myself from the rain.
Inside of me the sky blossoms and thousands of little happinesses make me myself.
One woman is born and lives somewhere in this town.
I want to find her. I know, I'll pass through some cloud of sorrow,
without wondering and hastily, because she waits for me somewhere in this town.
One river has stopped to wait for the sea.
From my little happinesses I'll build the most beautiful smile on her face
and turn her gaze towards east where the sky burns"

Ivica Smolec
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It's expressive and I like it :) too bad I don't understand Croatian...

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ohmy thats so beautiful again. I love the concept of waiting here. One can use the phantasy to makes stories about this picture. I love the pose and the expression. The lighting, the tones, everything just perfect. Gorguous...
btw, is it you in the picture? I'm not sure, don't recognise you on it.
bez komentara na ovo, kako tuzno:(
znas kako kazu ljepotice, ko ceka doceka, nadam se da neces predugo cekat

p.s. di samo nadjes ovakvu poeziju

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Odlicno! :+fav:

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absolutely wonderful and emotional...I love it

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:jsenn: This body holding me reminds me of my own mortality.
Embrace this moment. Remember. we are eternal.
all this pain is an illusion:jsenn:
eww koje stopalchine..

inace... hump.

tj. dobro upotreba negativnog prostora.. od kud ti samo to :P
Simply beautiful...
The poem, the model, the motive, the tones, the composition...
...beutiful...
One may say that the pic is too dark, but I think that it accents the way the model feels inside, in contrast to the window and the light that she avaits to come...
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My croatian isn't that good either but my english and swedish say that this picture is beautiful/vackert. The light from the wondov that gives the girl an extra glow so to say. You can really feel here waiting for something, many thoughts goes through her mind. The question is what she's waitng for. A great person portrait I think. Good work.:-)

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